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Desperate for a game with clichéd writing, wooden characters with a ton of dead ends?
No? Well what if I told you there's a good chance it'll never be finished and it's a first ever game attempt! Aha I knew it.
You are a guy who has decided to skip town to reboot his life and make some changes, hopefully those changes are your choice, some might not be. I plan mental and physical changes, mainly of the MtF variety, but I may try other things too.
~30k words now. Fleshed out second day bar scene and 3rd day launderette.
Reverted to default styling for now.
In the process of removing some of the early dead links, going to rewrite the opening scene a little. Some of the ideas alluded to will be added later in the game with different characters.
~40k words. d for dead links be gone! There should only be two now (one very early one that I may cull completely, and one which is just a vanilla path).
So a decent amount of new content filling out all those dead ends, particularly an evening with Brad and Cheryl on day two.
Fleshing out tf content for the stuff already there. There are enough choices now to make some small but notable physical/mental changes and give them some description.
Sorting out the font coloring.
Finishing day three.
You - You are everyman, whatever you want to be when reading it. As long as it's a slightly effeminate 20 something male.
Cheryl - Hot and friendly waitress that gives you a place to stay for your first night.
Brad - Cheryl's ex. Pretty much the opposite to you.
Paris - Your new roommate. A little bit bitchy, controlling, exhibitionist.
Marion - Your other new roommate. Nicer than Paris, generally.
Carmen - Launderette owner. MILF, domineering.
Bianca - Sexy stripper, no great lasting content planned.
Planned characters - Mike, Marcus. Hopefully more babes.
Really enjoyed playing this! I like where the story is heading and the pathes seem pretty clear currently. I like the subtle dialogue changes that happen depending on which response you give. Each character feels different and has their own voice and I feel like there is a lot to look forward to! One of those games I truly hope reaches a conclusion. Thank you for the work you've put in thus far, keep it up!
What is there already is fantastic. It's nice that the dead ends are visible though I think that perhaps you're giving too many choices that are inevitably multiplying the work you'd have to put in later. Which is worrying because I really, truly want you to take this further and finish it. It could be one of the most fun things on this website.
This is really amazing. Very good one, with very good fetishes!
Can't wait for more.
There is already enough content to see where this game is headed, and to be honest I can't wait to see more.
Hopefully this game won't end up dead like you mentioned, but rather be finished to a complete game.
Nice work and keep it up!
Please create a discussion thread for this game in the forums.