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Desperate for a game with clichéd writing, wooden characters with a ton of dead ends?
You are a guy who has decided to skip town to reboot his life and make some changes, hopefully those changes are your choice, some might not be. I plan mental and physical changes, mainly of the MtF variety, but I may try other things too.
Extra scene at the café with Cheryl.
Some actual tf content on the first day, including 4 different dreams.
More flavor. More thoughts, more dreams - signposting changes that are mainly mental so far, a little physical.
Hopefully fixed some bugs.
Fleshing out tf content for the stuff already there. There are enough choices now to make some small but notable physical/mental changes and give them some description.
Sorting out the font coloring.
Finishing day three.
You - You are everyman, whatever you want to be when reading it. As long as it's a slightly effeminate 20 something male.
Cheryl - Hot and friendly waitress that gives you a place to stay for your first night.
Brad - Cheryl's ex. Pretty much the opposite to you.
Paris - Your new roommate. A little bit bitchy, controlling, exhibitionist.
Marion - Your other new roommate. Nicer than Paris, generally.
Carmen - Launderette owner. MILF, domineering.
Bianca - Sexy stripper, no great lasting content planned.
Planned characters - Mike, Marcus. Hopefully more babes.
Personally, I'm a sucker for pretty much all of the fetishes that appear troughout this game.I can't even begin to describe how devilishly well the story plays out on a broad spectrum of male insecurity , emasculation and sexual inadequacy,etc.
In short,I think this might become my favourite game on the website.
P.S:If you need any sort of help with the development of the game,I would be more than glad to help ^^
What is there already is fantastic. It's nice that the dead ends are visible though I think that perhaps you're giving too many choices that are inevitably multiplying the work you'd have to put in later. Which is worrying because I really, truly want you to take this further and finish it. It could be one of the most fun things on this website.
I just can't encourage you enough with this. I'm truly excited to see where this goes.
Shaping out to be one of my favorite games here. A fun, well written story with just the right ammount of paths to experience different outcomes without feeling lost along the way.
Really enjoyed playing this! I like where the story is heading and the pathes seem pretty clear currently. I like the subtle dialogue changes that happen depending on which response you give. Each character feels different and has their own voice and I feel like there is a lot to look forward to! One of those games I truly hope reaches a conclusion. Thank you for the work you've put in thus far, keep it up!
This is really amazing. Very good one, with very good fetishes!
Can't wait for more.