A new life is the first game I'm trying to create. It is a erotic text game. You take control of a young man who is down on his luck and gets involved in a freaky lab accident that cangches his life drastically as he gets feminized by it. Having lost his job and everything he (now rather she) resorts to some desperate means of making money.
The game will eventually focus on making money via prostitution, as well as on building relationships with the various characters you can meet. Right now the game doesn't have much content yet. I'm about halfway done with week one and you can meet some characters that will end up being important later. Unfortunately the early story is a bit linear right now. I will attempt to give the player more choices in future realease.
In any case I hope you enjoy "A new life"
You take control of a young man who is down on his luck and gets involved in a freaky lab accident that cangches his life drastically as he gets feminized by it. Having lost his job and everything he resorts to some desperate means of making money.
Beware of light spoilers:
Main Character: A young man who is down on his luck and gets involved in a freaky lab accident.
Nicole: A sucessful businesswoman who runs a chain of women's clothing stores
Mr. Jackobson: The landlord of our main character
Mr. Doyle: A rich businessman that likes to spend money on hookers in his free time.
Alicia: A young enthusiatic whore that doesn't let her hard life get her down.
It's really not that hard. You just click on whatever action you would like to take. I might add a detailed guide on how to progress relationships here later, after the game actually is that far along in developement.
I really like the opening of the game and hope you will continue working on it.
1. You really should change the name as there already is a game out with a similar name.
2. The test is placed to far in the middle for me. COuld it be moved more to the rigth?
3. Some text is hard to read (Blue text on black background). Would be better to user brigther text colors.
4. Currently, the game seems to be a little bit too linear. The options are more pseudo-actions. That should change once the content grows bigger.
Oops, posted on the wrong game. >.<
This is a intteractive story. I really enjoyed the path that it is taking, but i would as it was suggest in another review to change the time to something different. I would love to see where to take this story.
I canot possibly see this as a game more like interactive story with bit of variation. Why? Because it does not mather what you do the story railroads you to whore ourself out without ANY strugling at all. And your stats at this point are prety mutch meaning less. It gives the wibe that in your term feminization has to turn yourself in to a depraved whore overnight. Also this kind of start will make the gaming part boring.
Nice start for a story but thats all.
If possible I'd advise you to change the game title. Unfortunately there's already a very popular game called Newlife, and existance of this game will cause some confusion. Some might think that you're trying to leech off another game's popularity.