Taking suggestions on a better title.
my best ideas so far: Cohen's apprentice, Flies in the Web, Snared!
suggested ideas: web of monster girls, captured by monster girls
please PM me or post in the forum if you have idea
You play as an adventurer after his party has been captured by monster girls. The game focues on transformation into a monstergirl, you control the degree of transformation and how transformed you are changes how the story plays out.
This is my first twine game so I would apreciate feedback on how to make it better.
.3.5.05: worked on ant 2 human path, polish
.3.5.04: worked on ant 2 paths, polish
.3.5.03: linked ant 2 to bad end, introduced ant 2 sisters route
.3.5.01: ant 2 sex scene
.3.5.0: finished ant 1 path,
3.25: finished ant 0 path and endings, finished bad ends, introduced all other planned paths, more polish than between russia and germany in 1938,
You are a junior adventurer who escorts a caravan with his party through a dark forest. They are quickly ambushed and you must decide to attempt a rescue or an escape.
You: I assume you know yourself; (the author apologizes but this games assumes you are a male)
Alonso: the leader of your group
Frederick: the thief
Anton: the mage
Cohen: a senior adventurer who watches over your group
Hit the blue words
Also this game is mostly an interactive short story, so there is more reading than gameplay.
If the game is ever complete there will be five larger paths with deviation within them. Right now it only has one.
this game is great! <3 i love how you do those insect girl TF's so i hope you keep up the good work and continue doing those Tf's well.
A Really fun game, decent plot, enjoyable to fap. My only qualms with this is that the grammar requires some work, and more, alot more polish to the game.
A short but entertaining game. I enjoyed the sense of humor and the small jokes sprinkled through the game.
A short but fairly engaging TF/TG short story. I can't call it interactive, because at this stage there's really only one way to go. Still, updates have been frequent, so this isn't shaping up to be another game uploaded before it has any content and abandoned forever. What's there is interesting and slow TFs can be somewhat hard to come by, so I appreciate that aspect.
Some quibbles though. It desperately needs a better title. Not only is the current one incredibly generic but due to the lax grammar and phrasing I almost didn't download it because I figured the rest of the story would be just as poirly written. I was quite happily mistaken, however. Still, a better title would draw more people in. "Into the Spiders Web"? Something like that.
Writing is okay. Story is okay. The only drawback at this point is that it is too short. 5 minutes and I hit my first placeholder.