This story is about a high school student who finds a device that allows him to change the body and mind of both himself, and people around him. Currently the story is wider than it is deep with 11 different branching paths leading to the meeting. There are a few XXX scenes implemented, alongside one transformation, and the story is currently 7000 words long and I expect to update it every few weeks with a lot more content.
Please leave reviews if you have the time! It's my first experience writing anything, and also using twine, so I would definitely appreciate any advice or comments. If you find any bugs or spelling mistakes, please mention them!
If you enjoy the game, please consider checking out my patreon, any support would be a huge incentive to continue writing. Although I probably will anyway. Any patreon donaters will get to play the next updates early!
I hope you enjoy :)
i good start, but need a lot of work
There is essentially nothing here, i'd suggest waiting a few updates before giving it a go. That said it looks like it's going to be pretty good eventually, and i hope the author continues with this.
Definitely want to see more of this, I really enjoy the direction the story is going. The only real issue I would have is that there isn't a lot of content so far.
The writing is not bad
the idea is ok
nothing more or less
The writing is good but remember this is very early in development so you will be left wanting more. Well worth taking a look. The author has done a good job proof reading and there aren't a ton of spelling grammatical errors. I am really looking forward to the next update.