Hi, gueteva here submitting my second game after a long while.
This is a COMPLETE LINEAR story. Meaning that you have no choice at what will happen for the time being, but that one path is complete and 13000 words long.
This is the story of Kevin, a fat 25 year old cooking school graduate that starts a cupcake shop with his buddy Mike only to find himself transformed into a hot blonde bimbo.
This story is heavily inspired by Booth Babe, Joeforest games, Yes, Mr. Brown and Rad Science.
My idea for this story is to make sure it\'s always finished, so I\'ll do linear stories and add new complete paths with every update turning from linear to CYOA. I might add some pictures in the futures as I might add some variables and game like functions in the future...at the time I just felt like writing a hot story and wrote the way I would have played it if I had been given options.
Hope you like it and make sure to review and like.
It's good for what it is - a decent story with a linear path. If the author does expand it into a true CYOA it could be a lot of fun. Let's hope that happens.
To all those complaining about the lack of choices, gueteva CLEARLY states this in the synopsis.
Now, for the actual story, as it's not a game yet, i like it. A lot. The style and feel of the game is really good. Nothing new mind you, but still a very good start.
All i can really say is, i hope you make more, and that you can make a choice to keep your dick.
Have a good one bruv, I really look forward to the next update.
This may not be a game as of v.1, but it's a great erotic story. Try it!
There's an interesting enough story here to make a short and sweet CYOA game. Choices like whether or not to lock the door before the health inspector arrives, or whether or not to "make a cupcake" with him, and so forth. It's a shame the potential is squandered on a linear story.
Let's be clear, this does not constitute as a game. There is no mechanic, there is no choice. It's a linear storyline broken up into paragraphs with hyperlinks leading from one paragraph to the next.
The content is entertaining, and if you like reading porn, you'll get a jolly out of what's presented here.
Just, don't expect this to be a game, or anything remotely game-y.
In fact, I'm not even aware of why the author went through so much trouble putting this into an engine, when it really would've been easier to publish this story as a pdf file. It would've been easier for the author's audience to read too.
Just, food for thought.