Hi, thanks for checking out the game :)
So, A Sissies Destiny is about a guy in his early twenties who moves in with two girls that try to "change" you.
The game revolves around humiliation, femdom and feminization and I'm planning on adding a lot of different fetishes, but for any extreme fetish that might pop up I'll always put on a warning before. Most choises don't matter too much atm but they will in the future.
If you find any spelling mistakes/bugs/whatever please notify me and I'll change it asap. I'm more than happy to listen to anything you'd like to see in the game. I'd really appreciate any feedback, don't be afraid to tell me something sucks if it does.
Ok I think I fixed the pictures now, thanks for letting me know.
You play as a feminine guy and the women around you try to feminize/humiliate you.
Amazing story and beautifully written (aside from a few minor technical issues as mentioned previously by others), one of my favourite games on here. Please continue as I am excited to see this go so much further!
It shifts perspective multiple times in the first page. Needs serious editing work, the first page should be the most polished. First impressions matter.
Great start. Love the content, both writing and images, and greatly looking forward to more. Only semi-negative comment i have is the narrative jumping between third-person and first-person a lot (i.e. "you walk into the room" jumping to "I look around the room", as an example). Really need to pick one or the other and stick with it throughout. Either would be fine, just not both.
That complaint aside, i really enjoyed what is there so far.
Jesus Christ! It's would have, should have, could have.
I assume you are a native speaker 'cause I only see them making this mistake.
Other than that I like the Femdom and the writing itself is decent and captivating enough that I want to see where things are headed.
Really good start to things. Excellent writing. Excited to see more. I'll be watching for updates.