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English
Release Date
05/09/2018
Last Update
05/17/2018
Version
0.2
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Alpha
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Trapped in Orchard University
by icarue

You are an adult of untold age. You have made some mistakes in your life. Your computer turns on as an ad starts to play. This ad might be the solution to your problems. A good 4 years of University, something that you have never tried; a good trip to the past. 


Hi, Welcome to the first game made exclusively for this site (second posted). I will be sincere here. I am making games for this site, mainly because its a very good community that does critique games almost the instant they come out. I want to make games in general, but the other site didn\'t prove as useful. So please rip apart my game, just try to be constructive (or not, Ill try to pick up useful comments from the debris). Short reminder that English is not my native language (not an excuse, blame all the typos on me. Just poin them out) 

I will try to upload a new version weekly during the summer, so stay tuned!

Planned features:
V1: (Hopefully finish by the end of summer)
Implement the mind effects
Finish story
Improve the transformation description
Implement more attacks (similar to a normal rpg)
Branched story depending on your actions

V2: (Hopefully coming 2019...?)
Pass the whole game into Unity
Make and implement images 
https://icarue.deviantart.com/ (is this good enough?)
Make a portrait that shows your character
?? Sound, music, etc?? what do you think?

 

Newest Update:

-Implemented the "day" loop (where you go to class, the do stuff)

-Added the combat loop to the story (after you encounter the hacker, you have to find her)

- Right now there are two paths Dean and Hacker. The dean's skeleton is mostly done, but I plan to spice it up. The hacker path is barely there. 

- Implemented the begining of the mind changes

- Introduced 1 new character (cannot interact with them at the moment)

 

V 0.1: Starting game version

V 0.11:

- Corrected some spelling mistakes (all that where given)

- Open the first branch: joining with the dean to deal with the hacker. ("but I wanted to stop the dean..." that will come latter)

V 0.2

-Implemented the "day" loop (where you go to class, the do stuff)

-Added the combat loop to the story (after you encounter the hacker, you have to find her)

- Right now there are two paths Dean and Hacker. The dean's skeleton is mostly done, but I plan to spice it up. The hacker path is barely there. 

- Implemented the begining of the mind changes

- Introduced 1 new character (cannot interact with them at the moment)

 


Latest Reviews - View All Reviews

Review by TG_Slave

Version reviewed: 0.11 on 05/12/2018


I like the way this has started. I'm looking forward to future updates, so keep up the good work!


Review by pingguo

Version reviewed: 0.11 on 05/11/2018


v0.11

A few typos were fixed.

v0.1

Okay thanks blobbob for the spoilers. Now that I get a better understanding bout the game background, the game itself seems to make more sense. Don't get me wrong. The grammar looks fine except a few typos. If anything goes wrong, it would be the writting. It is... how should I put it... uncommon to describe certain things as the way it is now. For example, I find using the word "horizontal" to describe a lay down suit seems a little bit odd. It is probably a straight translation from the mother tongue of the author and it is not that hard to figure out the meaning. You would just need a little more time and some imagination to do it.

*********** the rest of the review ***********

This is a short game at this time of development. The current end of development is at the end of the introduction, so there is no much to see by far. The background starts you in a virtual world, so it could be an entry to the latest contest.

The game uses the plain sugarcube interface with back button enabled, which you will need after the "view self" button appears as there is no return link provided.


Review by blobbob

Version reviewed: 0.1 on 05/10/2018


*** SPOILER ***

You VOLUNTARY join a VR university to get a better education (supposedly for 4 years). A hacker changes the settings of the VR university and you can't logout anymore and now can't participate in your normal classes but have to go to other very misogynistic classes.

 

A few questions:

  1. Why is the player character not "joining the revolution" (as in just doing nothing or not going to the new classes) and is participating and even defending this weird charade of a university?
  2. How is the player character supposed to stay alive in the REAL world if he can't logout to drink/eat etc.?

 


Review by Orphoenix

Version reviewed: 0.1 on 05/09/2018


The game is very nicely done. (although short) I am working on a spelling correction document. I will added it in the discussion area for this game. Other than spelling and grammar, both of which are correctable, this is a very well thought out story so far. Very interested to see where it goes


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