Our hero volunteers for a cutting-edge new gender reassignment procedure and is plunged into a world of intrigue, espionage, and secrets.
Update for version 0.2 is up: All of Chapter 2 is complete and the game and image files have seperated. Both can be found in the zip file. Also, switched over to MediaFire because I know people like that more than 4shared.
Version 0.2.2: Fixed a lot of bugs that were stopping people from getting through.
Version 1.1: The story is complete. Corrected a few broken paths to clean it up before the contest ends.
Deep Ocean contest entry.
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Some spelling and grammar mistakes.
Writing is alright. Main and supporting characters have some depth to them with a bit of backstory that you'll find depending on your stats.
Multiple branching pathways with your initial choices having a big impact on what's available.
Overall quite good. Still need to look at code.
There seems to be a problem after the transformation (after you view yourself the first time):
[["That would be great, thanks.|Deck]]
No link exist....
This is good, pictures fit with whats going on and the dialog is spot on. If the author does not continue the story it would be crime to all of humanity. 10/10
I really enjoyed the game. It flows nicely from scene to scene and the pace is great. There are a metric ton of typos and ill-chosen sentences and the one sex scene could be a little hotter since you're obviously not shy, but hey - its still pretty great.
well done and I hope updates are coming soon!
Really great start. Looking forward to some updates.