The game is cool so far, but the endings aren't that wonderful. I wish there was a bigger difference between the endings. It states that there are multiple endings, but those "endings" are basically just a different physical or mental description. One changed sentence doesn't really make for a different ending.
Not bad. A very simple game with multiple physical and mental transformation possibilities, with a straight forward plot and equally servicable writing.
Interactivity in the game is limited, but the photos fit well with the scenes described and while I did want the game to be a lot longer as a starting experiment to learn Twine it is perfectly fine.
Currently (as of version 0.90), this 'game' is pretty short and straight-forward, basically press one of two buttons to see a picture of a change, and keep doing that until you feel like pressing the third button, ending the transformations, and the game ends after with an epilogue, so this could benefit greatly from some more content by sheer nature of that virtue - however, that said, it's well done, the pictures fit nicely, the short story that goes with it more-or-less makes sense, and it did have an interesting plot twist at the end of the first time that I played it.
Overall rating: 3/5 - plus three for a good start, decent grammar, fitting pictures, and a clean UI, minus two for (current) game shortness and overall lack of content - may revise when the next update is pushed.